It is important to write an IELTS essay that has a logical sequence. This means that sentences are in a particular order, so they gradually ‘unpack’ your arguments.
I previously wrote a ‘discuss both views’ essay on the topic of sharing information. (Don’t read it yet!) The sentences in this essay have a clear logical sequence.
In this activity, try to create this essay yourself. There are 12 sentences in this essay. Your task is to put them in the correct order.
(I have simplified the essay a little, and added some transition signals, to make the task a bit easier.)
Where are the 12 sentences?
They should be working now. There was a problem with my site, but it should be fixed now. Thank you for alerting me to the problem!